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Comment By:  Jo on August 11, 2010 03:19:44 AM |
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"Play among the northern lights
"take a bite from the milky way"
Love those lines. Very creative work. The flow gets a LITTLE shaky in the second to last line, but otherwise, it works well. (:
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Comment By:  Pamela A. Lamppa on August 10, 2010 10:35:33 PM |
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I wanted to float in these charming rhymes. Lovely work with this one. I LOVED - simply LOVED your title. Captured me and your verse kept me. Thank you. ~Pamela
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| Comment By: Cliffton Clay Cromberg on April 22, 2010 04:47:35 PM |
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Enjoyed poem! Welcome to CP Keep writing my friend... Blessings, Clay
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| Comment By: Angelface on March 23, 2010 10:15:56 PM |
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This was a very beautiful write! I really enjoyed the read! Welcome to Creative-poems. Seems you have many fans thus far! God Bless Ya!
Angelface
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| Comment By: HOPE on March 23, 2010 03:47:24 PM |
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| This is a wonderful expression of peace and happy thoughts. I enjoyed reading it. Tina
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| Comment By: Dan J. Mazurek on March 22, 2010 09:07:03 AM |
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Your pen was a glue stick in your hand when you pen this one. We are stuck on you! Made me look at the milky way in her hand . Good write
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| Comment By: Lubaina on March 18, 2010 04:27:23 PM |
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A very Well written poem and I hope ure having a wonderful time at Creative....
Lubaina
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| Comment By: Jennifer on March 11, 2010 09:53:37 AM |
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pretty cute poem! Really did make me smile. Good rhyme skills too!
SMILES
JEN
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| Comment By: She Whispers on March 10, 2010 08:54:42 PM |
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Welcome to our Site... a very beautiful poem.,.....
YOu will enjoy it here...
Always ~ She Whispers
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| Comment By: Hannah Mae on March 10, 2010 10:18:26 AM |
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I love the descriptions and images you present here. And Pegasus is my favorite mythological figure :) Thanks for the ride!
~Shanna
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| Comment By: MISS_VEE on March 10, 2010 05:35:07 AM |
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Wonderful poem, Ive been sat at my desk at work bored to death and your poem has just cheered me up immensely! xxx
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| Comment By: guest_writer on March 10, 2010 03:01:52 AM |
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i love poems about butterflies. especially this one!
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| Comment By: Andrew on March 9, 2010 07:19:32 PM |
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melody, i'd like to add my voice to the other welcomes you've received. welcome to our happy place! as you can already see by the comments you've received, there are a lot of great people on this site. they are also some truly exceptional writers - i'd encourage you to take a little time and read their works....you just might find the inspiration for your next work. also commenting on the work of others will draw them to your work, which will give you feedback that not only helps your skills as a writer, but makes you feel pretty darn good.
this is a wonderful first offering - love your way of making the world a place of childlike joy - "...Play among the northern lights, take a bite from the milky way. Gentle winds hold us tight while we dip and sway..." -- fantastic. keep at it! i look forward to reading more of your fine work!
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on March 9, 2010 06:21:16 PM |
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Melody: I LOVE this. Of course all the animal references made me smile.
Welcome to Creative -- keep up the good writes.
Lady Dragonwyck
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