Today Is: Wednesday, February 24, 2021 08:37 PM. Our Topic of the Week: Memories
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: FreeRaspberry Ice Nymph 14 Comments
Date Added: March 09, 2010 18:03:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 257
Total Views
Members: 48
Unique Members: 32
Guests: 868

Type: Unspecified
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Laughing Butterflies

Magic dreams sing and caress,

where mystic visions hide.

Moonbeams dance and light the way,

while on Pegasus we ride.


Play among the northern lights

take a bite from the milky way

Gentle winds hold us tight

while we dip and sway


Fairies strike up the band,

penguins dancing to their beat.

Rainbows adorned by shooting stars,

animated flowers bloom at my feet.


I make no sense nor do I rhyme,

but this poem is from my heart.

Fireworks explode, butterflies laugh

with this love from the start.

Author's Notes:
Report Offensive Poem.

'Laughing Butterflies' Copyright © Melody
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeJo on August 11, 2010 03:19:44 AM Report
"Play among the northern lights
"take a bite from the milky way"

Love those lines. Very creative work. The flow gets a LITTLE shaky in the second to last line, but otherwise, it works well. (:
Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on August 10, 2010 10:35:33 PM Report
I wanted to float in these charming rhymes.  Lovely work with this one.  I LOVED - simply LOVED your title.  Captured me and your verse kept me.  Thank you. ~Pamela
Comment By: FreeCliffton Clay Cromberg on April 22, 2010 04:47:35 PM Report
Enjoyed poem! Welcome to CP Keep writing my friend... Blessings, Clay
Comment By: PremiumAngelface on March 23, 2010 10:15:56 PM Report

This was a very beautiful write! I really enjoyed the read! Welcome to Creative-poems. Seems you have many fans thus far! God Bless Ya!


Angelface


Comment By: PremiumHOPE on March 23, 2010 03:47:24 PM Report
This is a wonderful expression of peace and happy thoughts.  I enjoyed reading it.
Tina

Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 22, 2010 09:07:03 AM Report
Your pen was a glue stick in your hand when you  pen this one. We are stuck on you!  Made me look at the milky way in her hand . Good write


Comment By: FreeLubaina on March 18, 2010 04:27:23 PM Report
A very Well written poem and I hope ure having a wonderful time at Creative....

Lubaina

Comment By: FreeJennifer on March 11, 2010 09:53:37 AM Report
pretty cute poem! Really did make me smile. Good rhyme skills too!
SMILES
JEN

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 10, 2010 08:54:42 PM Report
Welcome to our Site... a very beautiful poem.,.....
 YOu will enjoy it here...
 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on March 10, 2010 10:18:26 AM Report
I love the descriptions and images you present here. And Pegasus is my favorite mythological figure :) Thanks for the ride!

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeMISS_VEE on March 10, 2010 05:35:07 AM Report
Wonderful poem, Ive been sat at my desk at work bored to death and your poem has just cheered me up immensely! xxx
Comment By: Freeguest_writer on March 10, 2010 03:01:52 AM Report
i love poems about butterflies. especially this one!
Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 9, 2010 07:19:32 PM Report
melody, i'd like to add my voice to the other welcomes you've received.  welcome to our happy place!  as you can already see by the comments you've received, there are a lot of great people on this site.  they are also some truly exceptional writers - i'd encourage you to take a little time and read their works....you just might find the inspiration for your next work.  also commenting on the work of others will draw them to your work, which will give you feedback that not only helps your skills as a writer, but makes you feel pretty darn good.

 

this is a wonderful first offering - love your way of making the world a place of childlike joy - "...Play among the northern lights, take a bite from the milky way.  Gentle winds hold us tight while we dip and sway..." -- fantastic.  keep at it!  i look forward to reading more of your fine work!

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 9, 2010 06:21:16 PM Report
Melody:  I LOVE this.  Of course all the animal references made me smile.

Welcome to Creative -- keep up the good writes.

 

Lady Dragonwyck





 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 89
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday

Billi Jo x (31)

 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2021 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.