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Author Name: FreeBarbara D. 11 Comments
Date Added: March 09, 2010 13:03:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Miss You
Hot teardrops say I miss you
Liquid pain in hazel eyes
Gathering to spill in silence
Heartache cannot be disguised
 
My lips pout because I miss you
They desire to kiss you, still
My mouth craves your devotion
I am sure it always will
 
Vacant arms admit I miss you
They ache for a warm embrace
I reach out for your affection
But find cold and empty space
 
Restless legs proclaim I miss you
They long to run to you my dear
Irregardless of long distance
To bridge all my doubts and fears
 
A heart incomplete; I miss you
Be it morning, noon, or night
Your love is what is missing
Every part of me complies
 
Author's Notes:
~Something from the archives that addresses part of the healing process.
 May those of you experiencing heartache remember
this too shall pass.~
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on April 26, 2010 11:29:11 PM Report
Hey Barbara...I miss you too. This wonderful write pulls out every emotion of a broken heart and a longing for the one that is missed and yes as all painful moments "this too shall pass"
Helen




Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 21, 2010 10:19:48 AM Report
glad i came back to read.  you definitely have a poets heart in need of a fix. [why we write] thanks alot of people can identify themselves in this work of yours.
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 14, 2010 12:51:35 PM Report
Your words speak voloumes Barbara and each one harbours a truth that each and every broken heart will feel a wonderful poem even though tinged with such sadness~Graham.
Comment By: Freejohn carter on March 14, 2010 11:35:48 AM Report
We are changed so much by people we meet. Wishing you were somehow here again. You write so well.

                                                                                John

Comment By: FreeMelody on March 13, 2010 10:34:17 AM Report
This described just how it feel to miss someone. Not just the heart but every fiber of our being aches for that special someone. I loved the wording, it was perfection. A flow easy as a summer breeze, just excellent in everyway
Comment By: FreeJennifer on March 10, 2010 12:37:31 AM Report
this poem speaks to me of yearning and of love. I have felt this. and you are right this too shall pass,

write on

Jen

Comment By: FreeSteve on March 9, 2010 04:25:00 PM Report
Well done as usual and I won't say more than that becuase its witty but not in tone with the write.   
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on March 9, 2010 03:34:59 PM Report
Lots of emotions and reactions I have felt myself too.  Time heals all wounds, if death doesn't take you first.  Great job Barbara!
Comment By: FreeKory on March 9, 2010 03:28:20 PM Report
Very powerful poem.  Very heartfelt and genuine.  I hope you find it is what your missing.  Nice job =)
Comment By: FreeJo on March 9, 2010 02:49:42 PM Report
This is beautiful Barbara.  I know those times pass, but they sure hurt in the mean time.  This was great.  It has a gentle, sweet tone to it to match its longing. 
Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 9, 2010 01:55:21 PM Report
gee, i wish i had an archive!  great work, ms barbara d - you nail the longing of the lost love - like that restless leg reference!  it just struck the right cord with me.




 


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