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Author Name: FreeThe Dream Ghost 1 Comments
Date Added: March 06, 2010 20:03:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Nailed Upside Down In The Realm Of Heresy
Upon the entrance way to Heresy, I already could tell this was a vile place
Full of wickedness and dark magic
"In this land are the Heretics, followers of false faiths
Practicer's of the dark arts, and worshipers of false gods"
Upon hearing the spirits words, I realized he spoke the truth
In this realm the souls were incased in what appeared to be tombs
Each branded with different representations of their specific sin
The damned down here were guilty of several forbidden acts
Such as preaching of false doctrine, followers of the dark arts
Practicer's of nocromancy as well as black magic

In this land were burning crosses, hung upside down
With damned souls nailed to them, as if to mimic
The burning of believers in Rome
And the crucifixion of St. Peter
These souls were worshipers of false gods
Such as Anubis, God Of The Sun
Osiris, God Of The Dead
Odin, Lord Of Asgard
And Zues, God Of Sky & Thunder

Though these false god's seemed divine among these men
Their worshiping and practice of sacrificial offerings were
A disgust of the highest order among the Lord
Human sacrifices were made by these men to some of their false lords
Sacrificing the youngest male among the family in order to please their god's
And by doing so believed they would be granted a safe season of harvest and good tithing
These men, women, and children were all denied the light of Heavens gates for their crimes

The further I walked I came across other falsifiers
These men were not worshipers of false god's
But rather non-believers all together
Athiest, Ones who believe the soul dies with the body
That there is no heaven or hell
And the things they do in life reflect not after death
These men were punished in the very way they thought
With unbelievable torment, beatings of nine tailed whips
Water boarded upon a spiked wood
Hung from the noose till dead, then revived to repeat the torture
Though these men were denied heaven's gates for their lack of faith
I felt pity for them, they knew not the truth, nor will they ever have the chance
To redeem themselves, "This land is wicked, we must travel on"
The spirit said to me, upon his warning I took heed
And walked past the realm of Heresy
Forward on to the circle of violence, we did travel.

Author's Notes:
Heretics, Athiest, Worshipers of false gods & practicer's of forbidden arts, these all can be found among the realm of Heresy, Upon as now is the land of Violence.
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Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 6, 2010 08:41:03 PM Report
Yet another horrifying realm.  Very well developed....


Lady D


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