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Author Name: Freejohncarter 3 Comments
Date Added: March 05, 2010 21:03:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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What ends this day
What ends this day
It trickles every minute
Blackbirds benches and seagulls
My mind is found in streets
Of where i used to play
I never looked back
But what ends this day.
Its like words will never stop
I buy them from a shop
A metaphor you pay much more for
There's fun in nouns pro-nouns
The adjectives have to stop
What ends this day.
Is when i sleep
Think of tomorrow.
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 7, 2010 07:18:18 PM Report
I didn't know you could buy metaphors. Point me in the direction of that store!!! *smiles* I understood this to be about a busy mind...perhaps your love of words? One never knows what they'll find when they open on of your poems John. =))



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 6, 2010 06:30:30 PM Report
 sounds like your still so in love with the beautiful Lady....

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 5, 2010 09:25:41 PM Report
John: I like this with the reference to various words and styles.


Lady D


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