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Author Name: FreeTashtego57 6 Comments
Date Added: March 01, 2010 11:03:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Epic of Luke the Puppy - part 8 & 9 - The Jungle Unearthed & Who are these dogs?

The Jungle Unearthed

 

Fallen plants in heaps.

Hurricane’s result remains

Luke fells potted plants.

 

 

Who are these dogs?

 

Is that mom and dad?

So many new friends to sniff.

First dog park visit.

Author's Notes:
Luke had a busy weekend - he managed to escape into a room in which he found a large potted plant most desirable - it reminded me of the aftermath of a hurricane in a tropical island.  He also had his first trip to the dog park - many sights and sounds and smells.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 9, 2010 12:39:01 AM Report
I love that you told your story in Haiku...they are rich!! Sweet little dittys for sure. You've captured the nature of a puppy with ease. Good stuff Andrew! =))

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on March 10, 2010 10:12:20 AM Report
I'm proud to say that Dugan has never decided to fell any potted plants. He has, however, discovered my mother's rosebush which is next to the steps in his yard. It takes a lot of cut sticks from forest trees to keep his attention off it....Sounds like a trip to the nursery is in order ;)
Comment By: FreeJennifer on March 3, 2010 03:37:04 PM Report
glad he had fun. I am also happy the dogs give you reason to write. you should try a vinalle or a sonnet. Both are good creative ways to write. and both are a challange. Ones I know you can do with excellence. Just a suggestion. '

Keep on postin about the pups I like that you keep us posted!
Jen

Comment By: FreeJo on March 3, 2010 02:32:38 PM Report
Ha, I can see him scampering all over the place.  I love you wrote this from his perspective.  I always wonder what they think.  Fun job on this Andrew.
Comment By: FreesHeRi on March 1, 2010 05:22:09 PM Report
I always wonder what they are thinking...ummm

good write Andrew

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 1, 2010 11:56:49 AM Report
Andrew:  what an adventurous weekend.  Yeah, they like to investigate plants.   I have two bromeliads in a large planter over by the patio glass doors and Dude looks at them with a lot of interest.   So far,  okay..........

 

Lady D





 


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