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Author Name: Moderatorlostmysanity 3 Comments
Date Added: February 23, 2010 12:02:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Can't You See?"
Can't you see me?
I'm walking down the street 
With a tears in my eyes
Can't you see me?
I'm walking down the street 
Bleeding from a cut
Will you not stop
To see what is wrong
Will you not stop
To try and help
Are you that self absorbed?
That you can't take time from you day
To help a person in need
What if I was your son?
What if I was your daughter?
What if I was a close family member?
Would you stop then?
Does it matter if you don't know me?
I'm in need 
Yet no one cares
I'm invisible 
I fall on the street
Grasping for air
Trying to survive 
Will you not help?
Keep on walking by
Like I was never here
My blood is on your soul
Would it have caused you that much harm?
To help someone in need
If you didn't know them
Would you want me?
To help you or someone you love?
In their time of need.

Author's Notes:
It's amazing how many people will just pass you by not caring.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeErin on April 26, 2011 12:02:19 PM Report
i love this poem with all my heart! it is exactly how i feel almost everyday beautiful writing i love the organazation
Comment By: PremiumHOPE on April 10, 2010 06:00:30 PM Report
Nice poem, we should all take the time to help someone that needs it especially if we are capable of it.  
Tina

Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on February 23, 2010 12:32:18 PM Report

Very good write...i know what your saying..great job!!


Angel






 


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