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Author Name: Freesophnibbs9 1 Comments
Date Added: February 12, 2010 02:02:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Night Withdrawls
It's night and this darkness is surrounding everything. The music that's playing is all that's left of a family. Each lyric giving off a detailed picture of a drive or a perfect night at a lake. Words in the form of dreams. Some pictures leave you longing for more sleep at times. Other times you wake up aching from head to toe from the pain they bring. Waking up like that makes you truly feel what is happening. Your loosing the ones you put first in your heart. Its not that you meant for this to happen, but it did. You did put people who showed promise first in those many holes, and this time they aren't open, they've been sealed by an unknown substance. Call it whatever you will. It is so searing at times you can literally feel your organs and even your soul slowly becoming ashes. At anytime something could just be gone and never return. A piece of yourself will just vanish one day. Never knowing what will go next you just hold onto the hope that something somewhere will finally reverse the effects. When there's no light any longer, the only thing left is this thick dense darkness that consumes you. It makes you get this fever and your body becomes drenched from the stress its going through. All of your muscles constrict and your heart feels as if it can't take much more. Withdrawls of people are the worst pain you will ever have to live through. Waking up everyday without seeing their faces, hearing their voices, because when they were there you always felt like home. No matter what tradgey befalls you, you can still breathe and know they had your back. Now the only thing at your back is the wind. It calls to you sometimes reminding you that its there. Remembering that they aren't there to hold you when you cry or explain something you don't understand, makes your mind flashback to the times they were. An ongoing cycle of agony. Never knowing when this emotion will be gone exhausts you till the end. If there is an end. Hope for an end. 
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Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on March 26, 2010 01:04:15 AM Report
Withdrawal rather than withdrawl, and tragedy rather than tradgey.  I don't mean to be critical.  It is an excellent write except for those misspelled words, and I thought you might like to fix them.  I loved it overall.

Damon





 


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