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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 5 Comments
Date Added: February 08, 2010 18:02:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Evening Heat

The sun slips down to the horizon in a slow deliberate manner

Spears of gold and crimson light pierce your white cotton dress

Walking toward me the curves your body are carefully outlined 

Time slows down and my desire for you rushes through me like lightening

The sun drops on a warm summer night just has your dress softly falls

Your fragrance precedes you as it touches my senses I am in a trance

You carefully pirouette around while I am slowly turning with you

I am helpless to move as your lips whisper…do you want me…do you want me now

No more words are spoken as we meld together in the evening heat

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on February 17, 2010 10:46:54 PM Report
Ooo, this one is just as warm and steamy as a beach sunset.

 

~Shanna

Comment By: Freecolin skilton on February 9, 2010 04:45:14 PM Report
Nice one Steve a lovely piece.

So who is she and when do you meet again?!

Colin  : D

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 9, 2010 09:24:21 AM Report
You write with such sincere emotions you have always been one of my very favorite writers.. your loyal fan...
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 8, 2010 10:49:50 PM Report
ooooooh you devil you.  
Beautiful ....
Thanks    that was nice.      Your wife I hope.
Gene
Comment By: FreeJennifer on February 8, 2010 06:52:06 PM Report
nothing like a good love story to warm up the winter night. I think this is beautiful! You capture every detail picture perfectly!
Jen





 


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