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Author Name: FreeDepressedAngel77 7 Comments
Date Added: January 31, 2010 20:01:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I'm Just Saving Myself
It took a hold of us quickly
Tearing us to shreds with each hit
Our love was like poison;
An addiction we couldn't quit
 
With every passing hour
Our medicine only makes us sick
Love lies lost on little white lines
For the crimes that we commit
 
Yet he remains beautiful in every way
His eyes illuminate, the path that we should take
Our hearts grow more brittle and broken everyday
We are trapped in this vicious cycle, searching for an escape

But realization caught my attention
Your promises kept my disbelief held in suspension
How can I get better, if we're always sinking together?





I'm not abandoning you,
 I'm just saving myself.
Author's Notes:
Inspired by "Candy"
Thanks to AtrophiedRibbons for helping me with this.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeS on December 9, 2010 09:44:18 PM Report
nice work

Comment By: FreeS on December 9, 2010 09:44:12 PM Report
nice work

Comment By: FreeDanniy. on June 15, 2010 04:05:21 AM Report
oh snap. You hacked the lies out of that one kiddo.
Comment By: FreeJennifer on February 18, 2010 08:40:27 PM Report
good poem. Love the rhyme!
Jen

Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on February 11, 2010 11:18:56 AM Report

Very well done!


Angel


Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on February 1, 2010 11:49:17 AM Report
Good for you.  Sometimes we must lose to gain.  This sounds like this is one of those cases.  Save yourself.
Good decision ....... Gene
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on February 1, 2010 04:22:33 AM Report
Those last lines are hauntngly sad in there implications an excellent write~Graham.




 


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