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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 19 Comments
Date Added: January 27, 2010 07:01:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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For Elizabeth




Itís early in the morning

I cannot sleep again

Ideas and thoughts bombard me

I struggle now to pen


Memories bright and vivid

Seem not so long ago

I held you, darling daughter 

The years, where did they go?


Sweet day of your arrival

So precious to my heart

My love for you eternal

Never to depart


I counted little fingers, 

Traced your puckered lip

Mother child connection

A bond that held itís grip


Images in photographs

Now sepia tinted time

Cast a soft remembrance

When I was in my prime


Sand runs through the hour glass

Moments fade away

It matters not how old you are

I love you more each day




Author's Notes:
For my daughter Elizabeth on her 31st birthday
I love you Liz xox
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on June 28, 2010 08:58:09 AM Report
That is lovely Cindy - I hope she is well.

 

love

 

David

Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 22, 2010 01:28:44 PM Report
You express yourself so well. Kids eh!

                                                    John

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 21, 2010 12:52:53 PM Report
Turn around and they're grown. How did that happen? Wonderful expression on love, Cindy. As they say in the song, "I don't remember growing older. When did they?" Good work. ML
Comment By: FreeTristan on June 13, 2010 12:09:56 AM Report
A really well-written and well-conceived, inspirational poem.  The meter and flow are excellent and the rhymes add a strength and continuity to the poem while the word choices weave the tapestry of a mother's unconditional love with artistic excellence.  A very beautiful poem that adds to the strength of literature on the site.  Great work.  Tristan
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 25, 2010 10:03:29 PM Report
wonderfully express deep rooted love so well written

 

Comment By: FreeJennifer on February 17, 2010 12:46:47 AM Report
This is beautiful!
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on February 7, 2010 05:41:11 AM Report
She will surely treasure this Cindy. I feel that things like this are worth more than anything we can buy.
Ali x
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on January 30, 2010 05:33:43 PM Report
I wish I could write something so beautiful for my daughter Elizabeth. 
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 29, 2010 12:56:37 PM Report
You have lost none of your touch Cindy your heart shines through in this, as sweet as the day is long and as proud and loving as only a mother can be~Graham.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 27, 2010 05:50:08 PM Report
Oh those precious times in our life...they slip away so quickly. This is a lovely poem of reflection...the years pass but our love grows deeper. It makes me stop to reflect on my own children. I can really relate to this poem..."sepia tinted time"...well said! Happy Birthday Elizabeth!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeSteve on January 27, 2010 05:12:34 PM Report
"A mother understands what a child does not say."   Very well done Cindy. 
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on January 27, 2010 04:07:23 PM Report
Cindy this was fantastic. Reminds me of my daughter Nikki, who will be the same age Feb the 22nd. Stange is it not, how we look upon them and remember what was, and what is now past? The images in our minds and all that has gone with the passing of years, seem just like yesterday sometimes.. I forget that. ya know?

 

Well done Cindy..

 

Moonie xxx

Comment By: FreeDragonfly on January 27, 2010 02:44:00 PM Report
A precious gift that she'll remember for life. There's nothing more loving to share than your thoughts of her. Great write, Df 
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 27, 2010 10:13:00 AM Report
Very beautiful poem it will bring happiness to her heart.. Children are our blessings.... Hugs pretty lady...
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 27, 2010 10:12:26 AM Report
Lovely dedication to your daughter...seems no matter how much times passes or how much heartache we endure  where our children are concerned, that love never fades...but rather grows stronger all the time.

Sweet dedication...

Hugs....Glata

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on January 27, 2010 09:58:17 AM Report
So very loving and sweet, the bond between a Mother and her children is very strong and is one that I believe that most men can't fully comprehend. You put forth such great emotions in your words here Cindy, i loved this.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 27, 2010 09:39:18 AM Report
are you trying to make this crusty old codger cry?  holy guacamole, you damn near did, particularly knowing a bit of the backstory.  this is such a loving tribute that only a mother could pen, but i doubt there are many mothers out there would could write this half as well as you did.  This one goes into my favorties list - I hope that Liz will have the chance to read this.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 27, 2010 08:25:41 AM Report
cindy:  happy birthday to your daughter.  Lovely loving write.

 

Lady D

Comment By: Freepaul holmes on January 27, 2010 08:24:42 AM Report
Well written poem expressing a love that can't help but grow and grow.




 


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