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Author Name: PremiumDream Hearted Poet 3 Comments
Date Added: January 14, 2010 20:01:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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the kingdom
I was defeated and agonized
by the king to forbidden
my kingdom and i had to break away
and clear all of my rights
 
as the stars rolled up
to the night
i pray to thee lord
as my soul to keep
 
now, what should I do
my lord? and the lord has
said to me i will gather up
an army for you so that you
can reclaim your castle
once and for all
 
as the lord gathered up my army,
we have fought for fourty days
and fourty nights and now
we are done with the war and we have
reclaimed our castle once and for all.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on January 15, 2010 02:48:43 PM Report
To me, it sounds like Christ in the Garden.  Not falling to temptation, but claiming His spot beside His Father.
Gene
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 15, 2010 07:46:21 AM Report
Your so amazing I really enjoyed the whole poems...
Its great to have you back....Thank you for your kind comments...
Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on January 14, 2010 08:42:18 PM Report
Hello Dream hearted Poet,

A very interesting work which played like a movie for me.  I saw it all happen: the battle and the victory!  Nice expressions.

Greetings: Peter




 


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