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Author Name: Moderatorlostmysanity 7 Comments
Date Added: January 03, 2010 19:01:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Feeling



"Feeling"

The salty breeze of the ocean
The gulls making noise in the distance
The soft sand underneath the feet
The splash of the waves as they hit the shore
Looking onward into the distance
Picturing how it would feel 
Just to let the ocean carry me away
Walking down to the shore
As my feet sink into the sand
The cool salty wind comes off the ocean hits my face
I close my eyes as it soothes my soul
The waves get louder
As the tide starts to rise
The cool ocean water hits my feet
Bringing me into a state of relaxation
As I wonder what could be better than a nice soothing day on the shore.
Author's Notes:
The picture was taken by me at Acadia Park in Bar Harbor Maine.  I'm trying to get into writing again its been a while since I have written a poem like this.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeChristina Lynn on May 3, 2010 12:35:39 AM Report
I've walked on the shore & your word bring back great memories. Very nice write
Comment By: FreesHeRi on February 16, 2010 10:02:38 AM Report
I agree Scott. I have a place at the shore and I am counting down the days until I can get my feet back in the sand.

However you took me there on this fridgit day..Thanks

 

Sheri

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 17, 2010 03:07:43 AM Report
I enjoyed the poem and theres few things more relaxing then a walk on the shore, well penned indeed~Graham.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 14, 2010 01:13:30 PM Report
Very well written poem keep it up I will read.... Your gifted so much...
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 8, 2010 04:43:12 PM Report
I think on the most basic of levels, we all feel that connection to the sea...Deep within us, we know the sea was our birthplace..I don't believe in a higher power either, and neither does God...:o)..len
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 3, 2010 08:35:49 PM Report
Hi Scott:  very relaxing write and the picture is a real addition.  Very nicely done.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 3, 2010 08:25:57 PM Report
Lovely descriptive poem Scott...I wanted to be there walking on the shore too. The picture is a great addition to the piece and even better that it is one of your own. What a great way to combine your talents. Enjoyed!!! This is a favorite place for me too...very relaxing indeed.

 

~Barbara~





 


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