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Author Name: Freemary444 3 Comments
Date Added: December 28, 2009 21:12:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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IN THE DREAMTIME   Dayrime ends and fantasy begins as darkness descends We walk across a bridge of stars... visit Jupiter and Mars Climb upon a flying trapeze... with no fear of falling... to visit the Pleades We swim in placid oceans with dolphins and whales with no fear of drowning no fears to assail we see a Rainbow Bridge where all the animals wait... to communicate outside the Golden Gate We observe the colors... that no rainbow could behold shining brightly from above upon the streets of gold Fly over a Crystal City with a view from up on high surprised at our gossamer wings... for we never knew we could fly   Mary F. Charest December 28, 2009      
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Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on December 29, 2009 09:31:33 AM Report
Whew! I'm out of breath! Thanks for a wonderful trip, Mary. Love your rhyming and fantastic imagery. Good work! ML


Comment By: FreeAmber P on December 29, 2009 12:28:03 AM Report
Beautiful imagery.
Comment By: FreeThomas Heath on December 28, 2009 09:56:14 PM Report
i really enjoyed this because of its creativity.

You are exceptionally creative, but my brief critique is that maybe you put to much emphasis on rhyme, which made some parts of the poem feel force.

But this was good overall, and i liked it.


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