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Author Name: Freesophnibbs9 1 Comments
Date Added: December 19, 2009 15:12:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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loosing my place
im loosing my place. Its starting to show on my face. I know i have to leave. Cause theres nothing more to believe. Im finally comepletely broken. But i will leave with one small token. Your smile etched in my memory forever. The pictures of all of us together. Fishing in the dark. We always heard the dogs bark. Then things started to get hostile. I now have a police file. You thought it was a threat but it wasent it was only a bet. And i won. That night i won. To make you see my monster. I took you on a seven hour roller coaster. And still we can all look at eachother. And we all will always remember. This apt has been a wild ride. None of us could ever swallow our pride. And thats why everything eventually died.
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Comment By: FreeSamantha on December 19, 2009 03:38:39 PM Report
Wow this is very Powerful! Keep writing!


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