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Comment By: David Turner on December 15, 2009 05:44:10 PM |
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Hi Alison- it's terrible really - everything than any of us can think of saying is a waste of ink because Old Bill has said it already!
O God, I could be bounded in a nut shell and count myself a king of infinite space, were it not that I have bad dreams.
David
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Comment By: Tanya Harrison on December 15, 2009 04:58:24 PM |
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What ever happens in our flesh prison, we must always rise for our day. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Comment By: Roger Bacon on December 15, 2009 03:28:27 PM |
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I think the 'what if's' in life rank right up there with the 'somedays'.
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Comment By: She Whispers on December 15, 2009 12:53:38 AM |
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Your incrediable!!!
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Comment By: Mujtaba H Zaidi on December 15, 2009 12:25:03 AM |
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Lovely lovely feelings, sweet sweet perception, gorgeous imagination dear Alison!
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Comment By: CeeCee on December 14, 2009 09:52:47 PM |
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Nicely done, Ali x....so much is given to the reader to reflect upon within this well written and concise piece. Perhaps it is the rising each day that saves us.
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Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on December 14, 2009 04:44:45 PM |
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Regardless of it all, today is here and so we rise, faithful to the task before us. Perhaps, sometimes, we don't give ourselves nearly enough credit for that. Well done, Ali. ML
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Comment By: Andrew on December 14, 2009 04:02:04 PM |
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damn those "what if's" - not to mention the "woulda-coulda-shouldas" of our lives. I love the way that you've expressed things in this piece - deep, but not to complex - ...and no respite from the questions - so true, so tru. well done!
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Comment By: Barbara Demasson on December 14, 2009 03:28:16 PM |
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Artists in particular are victims of emotion....few can settle the endless array to thoughts and questions that pass through fertile minds. The 'what ifs' are particularly difficult...fathomless indeed...and torturous too most times. You say so much with so few lines here Ali...I appreciate that...we rise each day and do it all over again...always seeking for balance in all things. I really feel this piece of work deeply. Wonderful!
~Barbara~
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