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Author Name: Freemary444 6 Comments
Date Added: December 06, 2009 22:12:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Summer into Fall/HAIKU
SUMMER INTO FALL
 
under the oak tree
children play in piles of leaves
rolling in delight

 
blowing wind brings in
subtle scent of burning leaves
summer surrenders

 
leaves twirl in the air
like dancing ballerinas
barren trees shiver
 
Mary F. Charest
 
December 6, 2009
Author's Notes:
Just playing around with this style.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on December 7, 2009 02:21:34 PM Report
What a beautiful series of haiku!  I can smell the leaves now.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 7, 2009 10:44:09 AM Report
WEll keep it up!! Great job!! Thanks for your comments
Comment By: FreeAndrew on December 7, 2009 09:54:07 AM Report
Mary, a great job of blending the simple yet beautiful form of haiku with tangible images i can clearly see.  outstanding.....
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on December 7, 2009 09:02:44 AM Report
Mary:  such lovely pictures in words -- I could see and feel the seasonal changes. Very nicely done haiku writes.

 

Lady D

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on December 7, 2009 06:42:56 AM Report
You played it very well.   It sings ....... Gene
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on December 6, 2009 11:11:49 PM Report
I am a loyal haiku fan...I  really enjoyed your lovely haiku trio. 




 


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