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Author Name: Freela-la908 3 Comments
Date Added: December 01, 2009 02:12:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Rain
 
I hold my head back and taste the rain
Purity slips down into the depths of my stomach
Gurgling stops and clarity rubs its fingers
Inside and out on my abused skin
 
I stretch out my arms and take hold
Of the covering freedom it brings
Down my cheeks fall not tears
But a different sort of love affair
 
I spin my body around rain dancing
Senses transfixed by the beat of the clouds
The worries of today slip away
Into the puddles collecting the ground
 
I drop to my knees but do not cry
Rain drops getting bigger now
Whole being soaked in freedom.
Now I cry
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on December 2, 2009 10:26:01 PM Report
Hello Dear MahalaRose! How are you sweet friend? It is nice to find you here. Very beautiful and sweet poem yopu have produced!!!!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 1, 2009 05:02:55 PM Report
Very beautiful...I love the rain myself.... I love walking in the rain...
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on December 1, 2009 07:15:17 AM Report
wonderful creative energy...a love affair with the rain...I love it!




 


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