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Author Name: Freefanofjims 13 Comments
Date Added: September 28, 2003 14:09:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Can't Escape~3A

I Can't Escape


I can't escape from all of this pain

That's swelling deep inside my brain

From the many times I've fallen hard

My soul is broken and forever scarred

To many countless times I have tried

Yet been revived whenever I've died

Iíve felt alone and completely scared

And wondered why I even cared

So for those who feel they don't belong

And told that all they do is wrong

If you hear them shout out loud and clear

Give them an ear they know will hear

Can you help the weak to carry on

And carry them when their strength is gone

Please let them know when they arrive

Someone is glad that they are alive


******DEDICATED TO******




Author's Notes:
A Tribute to my fallen friend who ended his life 10 years ago-
Bill was 34 years old when he commited suicide-
I was feeling his memory this morning thanks to a piece I had read
written by a friend here at Creative~Poems-
so I posted this It is from chapter 3 of The Journey-
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Comment By: Freetimetrain on January 5, 2007 06:00:00 PM Report
Amazing, feelings with talent!

Love it, and it brings up everything, not only the bad.

But... i dont know.

/: x  

Comment By: FreeLori on February 15, 2006 12:19:37 PM Report
Awesome write!!! very intense feelings and thanks for sharing.

Lori --<---<@
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 16, 2004 09:25:05 AM Report
I had read this some time back and it touched me then as it does now...your friend will always live on in your memories. I feel for the loss I know you must deal with each time he crosses your mind. Thank God for memories, as they allow us to keep special friends alive forever...

Comment By: FreeKati Mia Perttula on July 11, 2004 10:41:41 AM Report
Very moving,a beautiful dedication to a friend!
I know how you feel...I miss my friend.
I try to think of all those happy times.
Comment By: FreePaul Russell on October 19, 2003 02:04:26 PM Report
The sentiment outdoes the technical side of this poem, and maybe it's better that way.
Comment By: Freesanjeev arora on October 16, 2003 09:29:38 PM Report
really touching
Comment By: FreeLucinda on October 14, 2003 02:47:37 PM Report
Very easy to read, great job.
Comment By: FreeAlec Wilson on October 13, 2003 09:14:27 AM Report
Very well crafted! Great Read!
Comment By: FreeGlata on October 13, 2003 07:42:59 AM Report
As always...a great piece! Bill must have been such a dear friend to you. You always have a way of touching my heart with your expressions of love and caring for those whom you write about..
Great job. Keep him alive in your heart always :)
Your friend, Glata
Comment By: FreeDenel on September 29, 2003 09:07:21 AM Report
great tribute to your friend
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 28, 2003 03:01:20 PM Report
Comment By: TrialAnn on September 28, 2003 02:49:11 PM Report
This was a beautiful tribute.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 28, 2003 02:46:20 PM Report
Your appreciation of him is evident. Our loved ones live on through memories, Bill is still very much with you Jimmy, in your heart. Hugz to you! :)


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