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Writing Group: The Capricious Travelers 20 Comments
Date Added: December 03, 2009 22:12:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Love is....
Over the rocky edge,
With fears left unsaid.
As your weight rests
On a single thread.
 
Drifting through
Colourful rainbows in view,
Breathless, at the
Touch and hues.
 
Powerful and impulsive,
Electrified and driven.
Knowing the way,
Forward and sudden.
 
As the effervescence
Of champagne - a tease,
With the sweetness of
Strawberries.
 
Warming all over,
As touching summer rays,
Falling onto tender skin
Cooled by ocean spray.
 
Transitioning beyond,
Shadow and darkness,
Into a blinding light,
Of heart-felt gladness.
 
Author's Notes:

At Margaret's suggestion, Rich chose a topic and drafted the first stanza (in black). Margaret wrote the second (in blue) and we alternated stanzas until we had six. Then we continued to exchange drafts back and forth, refining each other's work and ideas until we came to agreement. We found it enjoyable to work together! Thanks for reading!

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 9, 2014 02:29:36 PM Report
Actually, on second thought, all three of you do. So excited at the thought of seeing Maggie that I lost count. Love, ML
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on August 7, 2014 12:00:19 PM Report
Ahh, how sweet. You two make me miss being in love. Well done. ML
Comment By: Freejamieson steele on May 30, 2013 12:50:50 PM Report

Rich & Margaret,

It may be capricious.

 It may even be arbitrary.

It's definitely not frivolous!

hmm,

Comment By: FreeMichelle on May 5, 2013 03:45:05 PM Report
Love is a revolving door, it may allow you to exit at anytime, and you can stay going around and around, with different passengers it holds the key to enter.
Comment By: FreeA Tyler Kehl on April 20, 2013 05:25:43 PM Report
Wonderful!
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on February 11, 2013 01:13:30 AM Report

I know I am VERY late getting to this but is is grand indeed.

Beautiful collaberation.

Linda

Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on November 25, 2012 11:32:39 AM Report
Great Work Guys!  I loved reading it.  How would I go about joining your group?



Damon

Comment By: FreeTimespell on January 8, 2012 07:29:13 PM Report
hAPPY yEAR YOUNG WINGED DRAGon may the Moutains be kind to you :)


Comment By: FreeTimespell on January 8, 2012 07:25:56 PM Report
LOVE IS...



I could see daffodils,

a smile;

her gentle words

touched me inside.



I opened the barriers

and bared it all,

naked in the valley of love.



My would be assassin

smiled once more,

plundering each beat

of my heart.



Consumed,

eaten alive

taken to the cleaners

hung out to dry.



My love

playing overtime,

drip feeding

the smiling

assassin.



:) XXX


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 12, 2011 06:54:59 PM Report
YOU GOT RICHARD TO WRITE SOMETHING????? :o)...Great clabberation, you three musketelles...len



PS....I've always wondered why the Three Musketeers used swords and not muskets....Never made any sense to me


Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 22, 2010 12:30:28 PM Report
So many idea's so many different slants yet all show their special meaning what a wonderful coming together of thoughts a joy to read~Graham.

Comment By: FreePhil on August 9, 2010 10:12:24 AM Report
Great write!
 It's expresses and describes feelings and emotions so well, so vividly.

Well done!
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 28, 2010 11:40:10 AM Report
I LOVE THIS! And love the name of the group, too! This was great, and the back-and-forth write like this is always a great way to compose!

Wonderful work...!

Gigi...enjoying the journey of the Capricious Travelers!

Comment By: FreeAndrew on July 27, 2010 12:14:40 PM Report
that's quite the talented trio bringing considerable talents to bear in this truly exceptional expression of an elusive topic - great work by all of you!
Comment By: FreeJennifer on July 27, 2010 09:01:28 AM Report
I felt this going every which way! Yep that is how love is! Nice work together this turned out really nice! and I like the drafts exchanged back and forth. It made for really enjoyable reading! THis is good stuff to go with my coffee this morning!
Jen

Comment By: FreeTiffany on December 21, 2009 12:58:58 PM Report
Love is all the above... both good and bad... happy and the sad... I love the way your poem comes together it makes for a great read

 

*Tiffany*       babi blu

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 4, 2009 11:32:28 PM Report
Oh yes, love is all that...and so much more. Lovely thoughts from brilliant minds. Enjoyed!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on December 4, 2009 09:17:10 AM Report
Margaret and Rich:  this is delightful - collabs can often work so well, the blending of two wonderful creative minds.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 4, 2009 07:56:29 AM Report
Very beautiful indeed you two have done a amazing poem with two different personality's... It so much fun writing with another person... Sure hope you two write another soon...
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on December 3, 2009 10:43:38 PM Report
Very nice. I like the format, the pieces all blended together like the softest of music.. Well done..

 

Moonie xx





 


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