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Author Name: Freela-la908 3 Comments
Date Added: November 04, 2009 01:11:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Slipped Away
 
I placed a bag over my head
Trapped my thoughts close to me
Fixated by brethlessness
Transfixed by the control
 
I was carried back to the darkness
I have been running from
My feet tripped themselves up
And I was lying on the floor
 
I ripped that plastic bag up
Along with dumping my tears
Accepted that it is over
And walked away
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on November 11, 2009 10:15:55 PM Report
tho this thing called depression hangs over your head you are answering it with your creativity.  you are such an expressive writer.  thanks for sharing your mind with us...shee
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 4, 2009 09:21:10 AM Report

Mahala:  I am happy to see you "ripped that plastic bag up" -- stay strong sweetie


Lady D -- hugs to sweet Mahala


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 4, 2009 02:01:49 AM Report
You just break my  heart each time... how can one person be in so much pain???




 


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