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Author Name: FreeaRomnceHasFallen 5 Comments
Date Added: October 08, 2009 00:10:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Elusive
Static creeping ahead, shrouding words I say
Already consumed you, wouldn't hear me anyway
Clouds circle overhead, denying further thought
It's been a challenge, a needless battle fought

How should I get this to you?
The static pulsing through you

Magic so little encountered seems to disappear
From insightful, open mind to the deafened ear
To perpetuate such redundancy should be a sign
Future sight forever clear to see a word malign

How should I get this to you?
The static passes through you

Couldn't hear it coming, saying the same for you
Once was so exciting, now it only seems to subdue
Aversion never spoken, you mentioned circumstance
Knowing how you function, I'd never have advanced

How should I get this to you?
The static deluge still ensues

Excuse me if conversing with you brings me joy
Static so profound it's unknown if I just annoy
Drowning in the white noise as you go unaffected
Taking your lack of word for it - I'm rejected

I can't get this to you
The static has consumed you.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeadam on January 22, 2010 06:12:41 PM Report
good shit! haha douches below have no clue
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on January 19, 2010 04:37:41 PM Report
Congratulations!  Awesome poem.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on January 18, 2010 01:58:07 AM Report
congratulations on a well-deserved award.  admired the way you kept coming back to static - a great central thread
Comment By: FreesHeRi on January 17, 2010 02:18:35 PM Report
Congrats!
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on January 16, 2010 12:22:10 AM Report
Congratulations John on this award. Although I am not sure of the total meaning within, I do appreciate so many of its phrases..."excuse me if conversing with you brings me joy"...heartfelt words.




 


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