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Author Name: Freewriter53 11 Comments
Date Added: September 29, 2009 00:09:29 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
"Distant Temples"
Timber - Gray Wolf Silent Watch - Gray Wolves - Wildlife Art Paintings - Gray Wolf in the Snow Art by Persis Clayton Weirs.
 
"Distant Temples"
 
Gentle wolf that prays against the moon's silver crystal shroud.
Her sharp profile etched against a crisp November, cloudless, starfilled sky.
Steam bellowing from her heart as she tearfully invokes her prayers back to Zeus,
and all of the Gods she thinks might listen to her mournful cry.
Does she pray,
or does she nostalgically calls to her long ago departed mother who nuzzled and caressed her on long ago forgotten soft and distant winter nights.
Does she mourn the pain that all of her loved ones have endured, or will endure,
so long as the mutant race called man continues it's long journey, which sometimes is, to self destruct.
Is the wolf's gray cludfilled heart just following her path in life, to thus fullfill her role in her universe without question,
or is she fighting to mark a portion of her existence in that path that all of mortal creatures must traverse.
One answer remains in her heart, that even in her infinitesimal role in this maze of puzzles we call life, she, astride the moon, her gentle profile etched against the purple sky, stood majestically alone, with the heavenly horizon at her beck and call.
Author's Notes:
The graphics are courtesy of Wild Wings LLC. I wrote this without any thought other than how all of the mortal creatures on this planet fight and struggle everyday of their existence. I also thought of how sometimes we all feel loneliness, helplessness, loss, nostalgia, and how all of the creatures on this planet find a way to survive against al odds.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on October 16, 2009 04:57:56 PM Report
Truly an elegant piece of literary artwork shines here.Sincerely,Eric
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on October 16, 2009 08:29:49 AM Report
Congratulations! A well deserved award. ML
Comment By: TrialAnn on October 15, 2009 06:47:38 PM Report
This is a lovely write. The imagery is wonderful. Well deserved award.
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 13, 2009 11:21:31 PM Report
Beautiful write Sergio, I enjoyed reading this.
Congratulations to you,
~Tracie
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 12, 2009 05:13:54 PM Report
See I told you your a awesome writer... and look at the reward....

 Another poem ..please....

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on October 12, 2009 02:43:50 PM Report
Congratulations on your Award, Sergio....Lovely write as I believed....
Margaret, the Baglady

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 12, 2009 12:14:45 AM Report

Sergio:  super congratulations for the feature poem award for this excellent write.


Lady D


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 29, 2009 11:52:42 AM Report

Sergio: you have so eloquently captured the she wolf.  And all of the creatures here on Earth, as we all deal with Life.   Your writes are truly captivating.  Please continue to grace our site...


Lady D


Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 29, 2009 11:10:08 AM Report
Dear Sergio.....This is such a tender write, one of empathy for the creatures that deal with us humans who have ravaged, killed, and ignored them.  There are beautiful visuals and the reader feels that they are within your write.....Nicely penned, Sir...
Margaret....the Baglady

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 29, 2009 09:18:57 AM Report
Sergio,
 Yet another Masterpiece.... Animals feel as well I do believe.
. You have taken a great picture and created a wonderful poem to think about....
~ Always She Whispers

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 29, 2009 02:04:27 AM Report
Vivid imagery and thought provoking questions. I think animals feel very much the same as humans...perhaps they don't suffer as much or as long because they are distracted by basic survival. I enjoyed this Sergio!

 

~Barbara~ 





 


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