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Author Name: ModeratorJillian Alexis 3 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2009 05:09:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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REMEMBER THE TIME
Hear the wind blow,
watch the trees sway;
Look at the clouds,
it's another dark day.
~
Feel the raindrops,
smell the fresh air;
In the horizon,
I see the Sun there.
~
Taste your own tears,
which fall down like rain;
Know who you are,
alone and ashamed.
~
Hear the thunder,
see the lightning;
Remember the time,
when you were not me.
 
Author's Notes:
I have absolutely no idea where this came from. I don't even think it makes sense, but it was in my heart to write it, so I did.
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Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 27, 2009 03:31:59 PM Report
Hi, Sunlight Soul.......Just remember that our heart and soul bring us the emotions and background to write as we do....the is remembrance within this poem, Nature, and reminder of how we must continue....the poem is fine, and sometimes we do get a slight surprise when out muse brings us to a new place....
Much Love and Light.....
Margaret....(Starlight)

Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on September 27, 2009 12:39:18 PM Report
Sis,
This write DOES make sense. Never put yourself down. Well done. :o) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.

*S* Whispering Winds

Comment By: FreeSavannah Ollar Jordan on September 25, 2009 05:56:26 AM Report
Hi, of course it makes sense; and it's very good and well written...every single person alive has something they wish to keep secret, something they feel would lessen themselves in the eyes of others and they want to go back to being innocent of the incident....so from deep within your sub-conscious, you brought out a poem that resembles us all.  Thanks much.




 


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