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Author Name: Freelady in hell 2 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2009 02:09:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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One Whole Square Of Differences

 

 

Little do we know

That our lives would met

In a game of academic

That became the game of life

 

We started as opponents

Became friends after a while

Then came out as best of friends

None of us expected

 

In the end we were lovers

Filling empty gaps within our souls

Seems we’re made for each other

For we match in every way

 

We match but we’re different

Opposite attracts they say

It’s quite true…we should know

For we are extreme opposites

 

You like fooling around like a kid

I tend o face everything seriously

You are so much an outgoing

I’m a home buddy myself

 

Simplicity and complexity doesn’t matter

It’s out of our vocabulary

Coz within the corners of everything

We things to always argue about

 

We have different outlook

Unmatching thoughts and emotions

Opposing ideas and say on various things

But we match in every way

 

We may fight, e may argue

But these differences always meet

Unknowingly we both compromised

Unwillingly two souls and mind collide

 

Fate decided what it would be

Been born for each other

With for different corners

We’re one whole square of differences

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on October 8, 2009 09:00:08 PM Report
very interesting piece,Danielle

enjoyed seeing how your mind worked on this

 

nicely done

Micky

Comment By: FreeSavannah Ollar Jordan on September 25, 2009 06:03:47 AM Report
Interesting how your personality came out right away on this one and then you described your s.o. (significant other)..and s.o. is just the opposite of you..isn't that the way it's supposed to be?  Opposites attract???  Who really knows but you wrote it so well..I would go back though and check my plurals and tenses..for/four, two souls and mind collide/minds...other than these minor things, it was good.  Thanks for sharing. 




 


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