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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 16 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2009 20:09:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
"We missed the fireworks."
I still doubt that I could see.
Even if my eyes were unclouded.
Although you helped, to some degree,
alleviate the dark in which I'm shrouded

Isn't it ironic then how we lie,
Not only to each other, but side by side?

That's fate. For us to fade. Gone dark, like heavenly shades.
You know the truth, I see it straight. Nothing gold can stay.
Trepidation. Anticipation. Culmination. We exchange.
[Sand & Water] 
the tide is taking
our memories away.

Now condensation is escaping
The lips of the love that I've longed to taste
A colourful scene for this black and white play
Before I found that Our World Is Grey.

Bombs explode outside my window as we lay together in the dark
Illuminations of living colours projecting stories in the sparks
Lights dance upon your face and I tighten my embrace
And now I know what people mean when they speak of fate

"The fireworks", you whisper.
"We missed the fireworks."
Author's Notes:

Funny how the entire day was all about the fireworks.
That's the only reason you were there. That's the only reason I was there
That's the only reason we met.
And we were never there.

At my happiest moment I realized that life could never get any better.
And it breaks my heart knowing that we can only go downhill from here.
I won't settle for anything less. So maybe it's best
If we just let go.




In my room. The lights are off. The window's open. We were hot.
In all the excitement we forgot...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on July 8, 2017 08:13:11 PM Report
I always come back...........
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 26, 2010 09:44:45 PM Report
Fabulous style you have Danniy. Definitely a pleasure to stumble unto poetry like yours. 
Great rhymes.
~Cindy ❀

Comment By: Freeshelbey on July 5, 2010 12:53:43 AM Report
Nothing gold can stay... i love that poem
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on May 31, 2010 04:05:17 AM Report
Like a story-telling theme, you grasped at our minds and took it on a spin of pure delight.. Your imagery was exceptional.. No poem this, just plain ole life captured in a blink of an eye...

 

Fab!

 

Moonie xx 

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on May 4, 2010 02:03:22 PM Report
Bravo!  This is beautiful.  I really enjoyed reading it...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 9, 2010 12:28:29 AM Report
I like it!  Damon
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on March 20, 2010 08:55:49 AM Report
Thank God the tide does returns like the poet with pen in his hand great job.
Comment By: FreeFarmer on February 26, 2010 11:48:40 PM Report
This is great. the rhythm flow format meanings it's great. you did awesome putting thoughts to words. love this one.

 

Cooper

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 16, 2010 03:41:06 AM Report
Well this works for me,rhyme stlye and content, simple enough to read,complex enough to draw you into it,good work~Graham.
Comment By: FreeAmber P on December 26, 2009 12:30:16 AM Report
Anything I say is going to suck basically, so I'm just letting you know that I read it and it's good.
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on October 19, 2009 04:09:23 PM Report

A Celebration of love..Very beautifully wrote with so much emotions..I love this one..


Angel Wings


Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 17, 2009 08:25:52 AM Report
wow! I LOVE TH IS! great great writing!
Jenny

Comment By: FreeJami Renae on September 27, 2009 03:22:26 AM Report

This poem has such meaning to it.

It's very powerful.
You are well talented.


Comment By: FreeLilly on September 25, 2009 09:27:27 PM Report

I love each line and as they flow to get better and better...You have written a feeling that is all to familar... You are a good writer.


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 25, 2009 04:34:52 PM Report
Is this poem really a poem?

Is your life really a life?

Is your pain really pain?

Is your car really a car...

or is it a bicycle?....len

 


Comment By: FreeTia Bayer on September 24, 2009 09:12:57 PM Report
This...was absolutely beautiful...I'm speechless.

Definitely a favorite of mine. Excellent.

-Tia




 


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