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Author Name: Freela-la908 1 Comments
Date Added: September 20, 2009 05:09:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Food

I Thoughts laced with white icing
but I must refrain
temptation always comes with a
coating

II Tasting regret for the second time lucky
Food has its own secret well kept.

Poison.

III Frustration in the colour cream
the bite of coldness' attack
as you swallow or lick
from the over-touched cone

IV Fingerpaint food upon the walls of my mind
delight in its imagery
paint a portrait of your bulging frown

V Lie throught your rotting teeth
taste the taste of the battle
corrupting your tripe

VI Cast far away the out-welcomed guest
who always out stays her meal

VII Feel the rejection of the beast
but don't swallow yourself in determination
to win
nothingness

IX food has its own taste
when I'm not touching a bite

X control slipping but gaining
at the same time
waiting for the day
when I can consume a sigh of
releif

 

Author's Notes:
Losely based on http://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88/stevens-13ways.html
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Comment By: Freeb w mayer on September 20, 2009 11:21:29 AM Report
This is too good! Great images here and I like the format. Well done!!




 


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