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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 8 Comments
Date Added: September 16, 2009 00:09:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Lonely Man

I carry your memory like a picture

Silence held on to the moment

Your look of worry for our tomorrow

Dreams visit me often in small pieces

Running toward you into the night

A lonely man hiding in the shadows

These feelings are always with me

Time passed and I wanted you to know

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on September 23, 2009 10:49:36 PM Report
A very moving poem Steve. You have expressed the feelings well.
Helen
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 21, 2009 04:37:37 PM Report
Only the lonely knows how he feels......You portray the feeling beautifully, Shady....Yer pal, len
Comment By: FreeA.P. on September 18, 2009 11:40:33 AM Report
i love love the last line, i think it single-handedly sums up the idea of "A lonely man"....nicely expressed.
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on September 16, 2009 07:18:04 PM Report
Steve,
Good write. Sad yet hopeful just to let them know that the feelings are there
no matter how long it has been.
~Tracie
Comment By: FreeSandra on September 16, 2009 03:58:34 PM Report

this is a beautiful message but with a sad undertone. Left to draw our on conclusions we can only


imagine. Good work.


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 16, 2009 03:38:35 PM Report
The font gave the poem a very personal feeling as though straight from a letter
Ali x
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 16, 2009 03:31:19 AM Report
I agree with Barbara, the opening line grabs the attention.  Stunning poem! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 16, 2009 02:03:20 AM Report
I love your opening line. This poem is moving Steve...sincere but so very sad. Well said!

 

~Barbara~





 


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