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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 4 Comments
Date Added: September 08, 2009 13:09:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: EMO Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Kill Your Classmates
soon to pull the cord
all the hours to disengage
your scream a whispered shout
in my homicidal rage

defiance of the odds
all colours blow to gray
my shadow with the will
to take dark and light away

a smile for the kill
how the cult jeers for my shame
the only penance for my sins
is to take in all the blame

so i tilt my head back
and let the beast lunge for the choke
all your laughs and snickers
are the noose around my throat

Author's Notes:
this is how you make a monster
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 27, 2010 11:04:45 AM Report
Hello Danny ;-) I feel your pain in this poem, the alienation and the submerged desire to get even...
Your writing is coming along well.
I have some suggestions about your next poem if you want to message me
 Ali x
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 28, 2009 06:22:20 PM Report
this is a fantastic read! Scary! I did like it!
Jen

Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on October 20, 2009 01:19:00 AM Report
I like this very much . Epescially liked the last verse. Every one has some dark place that calls for pennance , I suppose. Very talented write.
Comment By: FreeNichole on September 8, 2009 03:02:06 PM Report
Now this one I really like. I think I kind of understand it which excites me immensely. :D You're a very good writer my friend.




 


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