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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: September 01, 2009 12:09:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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On Rocks
On Rocks
 
We gaze into waves
See ourself
People can empty our sky
Crash over me
I want no reason
Why you love me
We gaze into waves
And mermaids kisses.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on September 6, 2009 12:35:48 PM Report
Beautiful in one word

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeA.P. on September 1, 2009 06:50:07 PM Report
there is something so entirely drawing about this piece...the setting is so vividly created through the spattering of thoughts here, i love how each line acts as sporadic expression and evokes imagination as well.
nicely expressed.

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 1, 2009 06:29:51 PM Report
John.....It seems that you are in love, my friend poet~!  Lovely...

Margaret....

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on September 1, 2009 04:49:52 PM Report
So much said in so few words. Lovely write.
Helen

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 1, 2009 02:58:30 PM Report
The mysterious sea with her reaching waves ..
how she entrances  us all... when we are in love....
 Very heart felt ... The power of love how it makes us feel...
 Hugs ... I have missed your poetic heart...
Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on September 1, 2009 01:00:37 PM Report
You have love for the English language, it is so evident in each word you write. Your ability with words and the language is extraordinary. A gorgeous poem. Love every word
Adri x





 


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