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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 12 Comments
Date Added: November 23, 2009 22:11:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Intimacy
I opened the door of sadness
expressing hurt within
something that was created
by the triggers of your last sin

I kept that door wide open
even though your reply had no soft tones
for to close the door of memories
the child inside still moans

And in to me see (intimacy)
I wished for
so a closeness could deeply be felt
for to close the door of forgiveness
is to throw out the cards that were dealt

I opened the door of sadness
for in your hand you held the key
but you locked the door behind you
when in to me you did not see.




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Comments:
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on June 11, 2010 11:30:17 AM Report
I can feel the anquish within these lines, dear Helen...When intimacy, 'in to me see'...is thrown by the wayside then pain arrives...Sad, but well expressed.....

Margaret....a Baglady

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 17, 2010 12:24:51 AM Report
AS I READ .... I WONDER WHO HE IS....
Comment By: FreeAndrew on April 27, 2010 10:14:59 PM Report
wow - this one makes me stand back for a second - very powerful - and so beautifully expressed
Comment By: PremiumCliffton Clay Cromberg on April 26, 2010 11:09:44 PM Report
How very true and sad when you feel someone looking through you as if you were never there...  Sincerely Clay
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 19, 2010 11:09:26 AM Report
Very sad Helen but nicely put nevertheless.
Ali x
Comment By: FreeSteve on December 22, 2009 04:54:04 PM Report
The title certainly jumps out and provides some expectation.  You did an excellent job of delivering an emotionally strong  description on the subject. 
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on December 16, 2009 06:49:01 AM Report
It is an extremely powerful and deep poem dear Helen, where you have gorgeously expressed the inner feelings in quite an eloquent manner! 
Comment By: FreeHarold Ham McLelland on November 24, 2009 12:33:19 PM Report
Awesome write!!!  I believe one can keep open the doors to forgiveness even though it may invite sadness...  If anyone wipes theit feet on us more than once then shame on us though...  An inspirational write from an inspirational lady...  Ham
Comment By: FreeAndrew on November 24, 2009 09:21:22 AM Report
you really drive home the impact that one person's actions can have on the intimacy of a relationship, and how it stings to be the innocent bystander victim
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on November 24, 2009 12:14:01 AM Report
I really felt this one. Wow!!!! Deep within, and not many can make me do that!!!

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 23, 2009 11:49:21 PM Report
I'm feeling this...a quote about a nail on the head comes to mind. Whew...that last stanza!! I could feel the door nipping at my heels. Nicely put Helen. Enjoyed!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeAdelle on November 23, 2009 11:06:13 PM Report
I really like this alot. This is amazing




 


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