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Author Name: Freepatty 92 1 Comments
Date Added: August 19, 2009 22:08:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I try
I feel weak
Can hardly speak
Thoughts of you keep slammin' in
I am stupid
I am dumb
No surprise why I lie
Truth is bad
Better left unsaid
Something hurts
I enjoy the pain
Shouldn't cry
So I try
I forget
Start of a new day
Sun comes out
But clouds are by
One wrong move
Can take a life
Theres a boy on my mind
Shouldn't be so I try
Get him off
Doesn't work
I brake down
Rain comes back
Clouds are near
Love is fear
Losing you
Nothing new
You ask why it's like that
I start to think
I give up
I don't try
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on August 20, 2009 01:22:03 PM Report
Interesting cadence...it works very well for you here...making us pause to think at each step.

Pamela





 


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