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Comment By:  maggie lopez sherry wilbur on August 28, 2009 03:00:10 AM |
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I envy you sometimes. you are beautiful at what you do with your writing and it shows by the responses you get by an overwhelming number of fans. You have a definate magic to your writes. I really loved this one. Always Maggie.
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| Comment By: Hannah Mae on August 28, 2009 12:59:05 AM |
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Flu meds or not, the imagery you manage to capture in the shortness of the lines is really quite stunning. I've always enjoyed the pauses made in the reading by shortening lines. It makes more space for the reader to think, imagine, and create within the poem. I love this!!
~Shanna
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| Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on August 25, 2009 08:23:41 AM |
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I love the format you are heading for in this piece of what I will call "spoken poetry" That drifting seedling, never does quite fit in ... I enjoyed this so much. Title is captivating ...Well done. ~Pamela
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| Comment By: Graham Jones on August 25, 2009 04:41:10 AM |
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I love the title Adri as both seem to have some kind of magical quality about them, there is a dream like lilt to this which you are so adept at and I am not disappointed one iota~Graham.
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| Comment By: Amy on August 20, 2009 09:31:06 PM |
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Love it, Adri. I liked the reference to wind chimes and the rag doll simile but I especially liked the image conjured of "a dandelion traveling on the wind". Meds or not, you always deliver.
~Amy x
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| Comment By: Glata on August 19, 2009 02:32:44 PM |
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I can sense a dozen emotions in this...sadness, reluctance...acceptance...etc. As always, dear Ah...this is a beautiful piece.
Hugs to ya!
love ya...GG
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| Comment By: Steve on August 18, 2009 04:17:43 AM |
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Your words and imagery are like a very pleasant dream.
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| Comment By: Cynthia Jones on August 14, 2009 08:16:19 AM |
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Adri,
This is a perfectly penned piece of poetry my friend. Well done. :o) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
*S* Whispering Winds
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| Comment By: b w mayer on August 10, 2009 05:21:06 PM |
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I like this very much. I really like the image of the wind chimes reflecting life. There is a whole poem there. Very nice!!
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| Comment By: john carter on August 10, 2009 02:19:55 AM |
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Moonbeams! Find Dandelion dreams. Whenever they find the flower. They kiss or blow away a Dandelions dreams.
John xxx
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on August 9, 2009 03:35:35 PM |
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I think you make a valid point concerning the nature of life, Adri.....Control is but illusion. Thinking we have some makes us less frightened...len
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| Comment By: FLETCHER on August 9, 2009 01:29:37 PM |
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That is one of the Best "About this Poems" I have Seen Adri.
You are a hoot! And a wonderful writer.
Yours ....Fletch
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| Comment By: Filthy on August 7, 2009 04:40:56 PM |
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One of your finest writes to date! I love poems that seem to have a life all of their own, like even you the writer had no idea where it was going and how it would end. Into my faves with this one Adri.
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| Comment By: She Whispers on August 6, 2009 10:52:47 PM |
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If the meds do this.... goodness this is a very beautiful poem...
I have always enjoyed your poetry...
Always ~ She Whispers
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| Comment By: S on August 6, 2009 06:24:43 PM |
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nice one !
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| Comment By: Moon Fairy on August 6, 2009 06:14:23 PM |
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Adri,
I love this! Truly beautiful.
~Tracie
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on August 6, 2009 05:52:25 PM |
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Adri: this is delightful.
Lady D
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