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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 8 Comments
Date Added: August 06, 2009 01:08:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Where you go I will follow

The wind blows

As the sky turns gray

Tiny foot prints

Lead me to you

 

The willow bends

As the cold grips me

My feelings push

Me ever forward

 

The road is so long

As I start out

I wish I could fly

Like a voice that sings

 

The moment arrives

As love opens the door

Your heart is mine

Where you go I will follow

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 17, 2009 09:56:39 AM Report
You know what ..thats how it should be...
Comment By: FreeButterfly on September 11, 2009 05:26:15 PM Report
Great poem Steve..I have missed reading your writes.

Hugs,

Butterfly

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 10, 2009 07:34:43 PM Report
I always tell my wife that if she ever decides to leave me to let me know so I can go with her.. :o)...len
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on August 10, 2009 07:02:43 PM Report
Lovely heartfelt poem Steve...

A pleasure to read this flowing poem~

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 6, 2009 08:44:43 PM Report

It is a beautiful and dedicated to love poem, Steve...Lovely in using the elements to tell the story...
Good work..


Margaret, the Baglady


Comment By: FreeAdri on August 6, 2009 06:26:10 PM Report
I love these love poems you write, they are so honest!
Lovely
Adri x

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on August 6, 2009 06:18:49 PM Report
Steve,
Hi! I love so many things about this, particularly how it tells a story-- kind of melancholy until you
read to the second to last stanza,then the warming light shines through as the door opens and that
leaves me smiling...enjoyed!!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 6, 2009 01:41:22 AM Report
Seems like the relationship started out with some turbulance but I'll bet the cold lost its grip as soon as the warmth of love hit you. You changed it up at the end--generally it is expressed, "my heart is yours, where you go I will follow"...giving her love power over you but in this case you loving her is enough to lay claim to her heart and thus you will follow. Win/win anyway you mix it up me thinks!

 

~Barbara~ 





 


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