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Author Name: Freepatty 92 1 Comments
Date Added: August 03, 2009 23:08:29 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Grieving & Loss Add To Favorites | Text Only
Lost Lifes !
Tears fall down her eyes
As her child cries
The little boy is in pain
His lungs are ready to give away
His breathing gets worse
WIth each breath that he takes
The mother can't take it
She cries out for help
The doctors do everything that they can
But the child keeps screaming
He wants it to end
The clock keeps on ticking
The seconds go by
They do everything to keep him alive
The fight goes on
They don't give up
The mother is praying
She wants him around
Finlly he stops
The room is quiet now
The little boy is way up high in the sky
He's with his daddy who died years ago
He went off to war
Not knowing there was a son waiting at home
But now ther together
Happy and safe
Waiting for mommy
To join them someday
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Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 4, 2009 08:44:30 AM Report
Sad and terrifying real write here, Patty. I wish you sunshine and brighter thoughts...

Margaret, The Baglady


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