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Author Name: Freepatty 92 2 Comments
Date Added: July 24, 2009 11:07:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Suicide
Will you miss me when I die?
That is one thing that I worry about.
I want you to move on of course,
But not too soon just so that I know I was loved.

I hope that at my funeral you will laugh not cry,
Although I kind of want you to shed a tear because I'm not their to joke around.
I don't want to sound selfish when I say those things,
But I am kind of jealous that you still get to live.

Now that I'm here,
I want to be there.
Even though I know it's too late,
I'll ask God for one more chance.

I fell asleep.
Oh wait no I didn't.
I think I woke up,
To see a doctor who told me "You survived suicide".
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeeric on January 31, 2010 01:35:47 AM Report
WOW!this was a good write.the ending is quite catchy.i read this this more than a couple times.lol.good job,keep it up,check some of mone adn let me know what u think:)

 

Comment By: FreeShuberth Dias on August 1, 2009 04:21:00 PM Report
its sad :( the first stanza is how i feel and is whats on my minds everyday :(

a heartfelt poem

 

Shuberth





 


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