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Author Name: FreeDavid Eagles 5 Comments
Date Added: July 19, 2009 03:07:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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THE BOX
                                            THE BOX
 
 

 Don't let it close.
 For it may never open again.
 
 What's inside the box may surprise you. 
 It's the key to living LIFE outside THE BOX.
 
 And if the box becomes locked.
 Pray that the thing's we are granted  in life
  are not inside.
 
 HAPPYNESS, for without happyness a person can be lost forever,
 not knowing what life really has to offer.

 LOVE, for it bring's unimaginable feeling's
 and unwaivering surrender to life at its peek.

 FAITH, allow's us to pick our head's up high,
 when life, at times, bring's a person to the very
 unappealing bottom.
 

 TRUST, without trust in anything life has to offer,
 it make's for a boring and lonley existence.

 You think the box is open
 but.. is it...........really. 

 You only drilled hole's to let some out,
 but in reality, it's leaking, not streaming
 like life mean't it to be.
 
 
 DONT LET THE BOX CLOSE,
 FOR IT MAY TAKE A LIFE TIME
 TO OPEN AGAIN.
    

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on August 17, 2009 03:54:01 PM Report
Very good piece, very deep and intens.  There is a brutal honesty in the words.
Great poem.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeHanane on July 21, 2009 11:24:41 AM Report
wow David. an original idea. The Box I like the way you structure your poem.

 

Brilliant Dear Poet

 

HAN

Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 21, 2009 12:42:57 AM Report
I love your writes so much! You are definately my favorite author. It's offical. I can't wait to read more from you.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 20, 2009 06:37:16 PM Report
This is amazing love the contents of this poem..
 Sealed in a box....
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeShuberth Dias on July 19, 2009 02:12:32 PM Report
like the meaning of it. well done

 

Shuberth





 


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