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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 10 Comments
Date Added: July 18, 2009 13:07:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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For you.
Merry Christmas.

I've been lying in bed for a while now. Attempting to let the music lull me into a false sense of security. It never came. Somehow my thoughts drifted onto memories of you. So sweet and quirky. Turned ugly and back again. I guess you're better off now. Better off to someone, some people. Truthfully, you come to mind more than you'd think. And more than I'd admit on any other day to any other person. Even after all this time. I don't know how long its been. Never was good with such details. I guess I was right in the end though, wasn't I? No, not just in the end, I was right from the beginning, too. What's the point of this? I know it doesn't matter, not to you. But I just had to say it. To the only person that could know. Because you were there. You don't have to think about it, this, any of it. Just read it and maybe one day you will understand. Even if it means nothing. Even if you forgot such silly things from lifetimes ago. When you were just a girl. And I was just a fool. I'm still a fool. That's all I'll ever be. But I needed you to know. That somewhere there's someone still thinking of you. Who you used to be, even if you don't like who that was. A fragment of a girl, interrupted by a fragment of a boy. Don't write back. I never expected you to, and I'd only be disappointed if you did. I just hope you know that. I can't make you remember me, and I'm not sure I want you to at all. But for some reason I can't bear the thought of being forgotten. ah...foolish. As always. If only I could phrase this better. It's hard, though, knowing that I'm no one to you. I'm not saying that I want to be, no, I don't. Not now. But my mind wanders. Scenario. Scenarios. I'm sure you'll understand. The retrospect. The hindsight. And the foresight. I came here writing this. Knowing that I shouldn't. Knowing it would make little sense to you. Knowing it would hold little meaning to you. But I wrote it. For you.

-[      ].
Author's Notes:
on letting go
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on May 31, 2018 08:34:43 PM Report

Not forgotten......




Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on August 2, 2015 06:09:53 PM Report
Never forget....


Comment By: Freeshelbey on June 30, 2010 01:41:06 AM Report
I have never seen poems that were so moving... you really something special :]
Comment By: FreeJasmine on February 9, 2010 12:25:54 PM Report
This has such simplistic impact that it's almost overwhelmingly poignant. I like the way it's written as if to one specific person, but still manages to make your audience feel like you are speaking directly to them. It's full of guilt and grime and honesty. love it.
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on January 18, 2010 12:38:38 PM Report

You are so gifted..Beautiful and from your heart.....


Angel


Comment By: FreeLubaina on December 24, 2009 03:33:32 PM Report
WELL WRITTEN...STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART...

Lubaina.

Comment By: FreeAngelface on September 21, 2009 01:53:16 AM Report
This was well penned,almost like it was talking straight into my heart! I felt your pain, and your love! Words can not begin to say what my heart truly wants to say or ask.. But again nice write!

 

Angelface

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 4, 2009 01:11:17 AM Report
great poem ..but you need to space it up to get all the meaning...
Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on August 26, 2009 01:43:59 PM Report
How lonely and sad. I know this feeling . I too want this to be known by the ones who should see it and don't. Very good write.Always Maggie.
Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on August 17, 2009 10:54:51 AM Report
good poem




 


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