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Author Name: Freevictor69 9 Comments
Date Added: July 17, 2009 13:07:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Butterfly Kiss
As I lay on my back looking up at the sky
A shadow falls across me
I close my eyes and smile
Waiting for what I know is coming
Your hair tickles my face
As you bend to kiss my lips
I'm reminded of butterflies
Stealing kisses from flowers
Author's Notes:

Thanks for the picture Hanane.

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Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on November 21, 2009 12:21:48 PM Report
Wow....... what a superb depiction; really sweet and delightful !
Comment By: Freeguest_writer on August 30, 2009 10:46:50 AM Report
i love the imagery here! this is a romantic poem. i think you made Hanane's day.

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 9, 2009 05:22:09 PM Report
Yah I like this.....looking up at the sky and finding something even sweeter...mmm nice one John.


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 8, 2009 07:14:54 PM Report
Perhaps I should get a haircut??? :o)...LOvely and tender, Brother, John...You dog, you!....len
Comment By: PremiumGlata on July 26, 2009 07:02:01 AM Report
You know me, John...I am a sucker for a tender moment...and this is tender as can be, and full of romance, even though it's just 2 verses! A lot can be said in a few words...especially when it's the emotion that rules the heart!

Hugs to ya, and love ya bunches!

Yer goofy American sis...


Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 21, 2009 12:53:56 PM Report
This is super John. I wasn't ready for those last two lines. Excellent.


Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 21, 2009 04:31:01 AM Report
Romantic and tender as hell John! Joe
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on July 17, 2009 06:18:28 PM Report
Pure and real emotion. Love the read. This is what passion and love is about. Everyday feelings..

I also use images for my inspiration. They kind of speak to me in a way..




Comment By: FreeHanane on July 17, 2009 02:35:05 PM Report
Wonderful John! I adore butterflies.

Excellent Job. I am happy the picture helped.


Keep the inspiration



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