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Author Name: FreeJame Richardson 2 Comments
Date Added: July 11, 2009 01:07:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Immortal
Life is getting too lonely.
The das pass, and the sun rises
and the sun falls.
And then the moon rises,
bringing on the night.
 
And nowadays love is too fragile,
but still as precious as ever.
And the tears of the immortal
fall like they alwas have,
as blood.
 
I, the immortal,
cry for my dear girl,
the one who I haven't seen for a century.
My dear sweet girl,
these blood tears of mine,
will bring you back to me.
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Comment By: FreeMoonStar on July 11, 2009 01:58:42 AM Report
Sad, yet with a quality of deep feeling.. I liked this. Such sweetness inside that I felt tug at the heart-strings..

 

 

Hugs,

Moonie

 

Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 11, 2009 01:38:55 AM Report
Aw. So sad and beautiful. This is going in my faves.




 


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