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Author Name: FreeDreamersEscape 5 Comments
Date Added: July 13, 2009 01:07:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Lost Stars
The heavens...
With their ancient wisdom and wonder...
Shine down upon us...

Oh little star tell me your secrets...
Of the treasures of the universe...
The beauty you see out there...
The great and ancient legends you hide...
Humanity is so small a comparison...
You must see beauty in everything...
To be in such peaceful greatness...
 
~**~

The heavens..
A canvas embroidered with stars
In such romantic nights

Each star becomes a little topaz
That changes its place with your little finger
To draw the wish that lies in your heart

The heavens
A realm of all the dead ones
They dwell there
Heavens are refugee for their souls
Those sheer souls
lying on clouds
We smell their scent
The heavens

Such a painting is a gift
it is the oldest legend of all times

The heavens
the God's Miracle
 
~**~
 
The heavens fear no exemption
To be free of what has riddled you...
climb to the bliss of the unknown
 
See whats real with eyes of redemption
Captivate the dreams of oblivion
Find whats anew
peacefull ,good and true
 
Fear not for you survived
the day after tomorrow.
Seek the secret of this universes creator
 
Claim we put on one another
Smile
Saw a familiar friend
that i made at the end
Author's Notes:
Dark Pink = Ellie Girl
 
Olive Green= Hanane
 
Dark Blue= Toria
 
About how our souls meet in the heavens while we're asleep
and that is how sometimes when you meet a person it's like you've known them all your life.
 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumEric on July 21, 2009 04:44:32 AM Report

A friend of mine told me about this poem that you and your friends have writen.  I have to say I enjoyed reading it and I thought it was simply wonderful.  Especially how the  poem was writen by three people but it sounds as though it is by one author.


Comment By: FreeDavid Eagles on July 21, 2009 02:33:48 AM Report
Ellie,Hanane,Toria you three individuals are just amazing, its astonishing that three individuals minds have intertwinded to collaborate on such a wide open subject and capture the essence of its beauty. Once again ellie i have read another, that will b joining the rest in my favs, thanks so much its a wonderfull masterpiece of just some of the examples this vast universe has to offer.  THANKS!
Comment By: FreeToria on July 13, 2009 08:11:37 PM Report
Thanks for being so nice truely i had alot of fun writing with such taleted people. You two are truly my souls best friends.

Huggs! : )

Your good friend

~Toria

Comment By: FreeHanane on July 13, 2009 05:13:52 PM Report
Hi Ellie,

 

It was a great pleasure to me to do with both You and Toria such a piece!

You and Toria did a good job. I hope to do other works with both in the future.

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 13, 2009 08:07:21 AM Report
Ellie, Hanane, Toria, oh girls!   You have done a spectacular job with this one....deep, searching meaning and strong emotions mesh together wonderfully....my three litttle twinkle stars...i am proud of you for what you have created and the friendship that wraps you together.  warm wishes to all three, shee




 


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