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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 5 Comments
Date Added: July 05, 2009 11:07:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Winding river
The banks on the shore
How they twist and turn
The decisions I've made
Make the murky waters churn
 
It's that winding river
That holds the water of my life
Creation of my being
Currents of strife
 
Yet on this winding journey
Each time I've reached the shore
There I've found reason
To return to turgid water once more
 
For life is but a journey
Sometimes the river slows
To allow me to see it's pitfalls
It's just the way the river flows
 
Each of us has a winding river
With highs and lows in every spot
It's the only river we're given
We have to make the best of what we've got
 
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Comment By: FreeGlata on July 6, 2009 03:06:04 AM Report
Life, expressed beautifully! Without the tumultuous currents and undertows, where would be the passions in life? The waters may become muddied with strife along the way, but if we didn't have the strife we'd never learn to appreciate the true magnificence of peace.

Loved the way you expressed life with a river's flow....

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 5, 2009 11:31:22 PM Report
As aways you deliver your thoughts and emotions...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSavannah Ollar Jordan on July 5, 2009 05:01:20 PM Report
Yes, yes, it is so good...I couldn't think of way to put into words a poem to fit this topic..looks like you did it so well.  Thanks so much. Savannah

 

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 5, 2009 12:14:27 PM Report
wonderful look at the winding river, your journey, and life...very similar to what i was thinking about when this topic presented itself.  "its the only river we are given...we might as well make the best of what we got" ...how true!  enjoyed this piece of realism.  shee
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on July 5, 2009 12:05:46 PM Report
Henry:  beautifully written.  I really understand the message here. 

 

Lady D





 


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