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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 6 Comments
Date Added: July 04, 2009 11:07:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Bands of gold
Held within these bands of gold
Lives a promise to forever hold
Your precious heart in my hands
That love is bound by two gold bands
 
Bands of gold that shall never rust
A strong foundation built by trust
That your love is hels safe and secure
Of my love for you you'll always be sure
 
To your heart I will ever be true
For it is the most special part of you
This trust I vow will never be broken
Only for you my heart is spoken
 
Today I promise you love that never ends
Witnessed before God, family and friends
Thar your hand and mine will eternally hold
The symbol of love within these bands of gold
Author's Notes:
I just read Glata's poem and her words inspired me to try my hand at writing vows. I hope I did it right.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on November 26, 2009 01:16:29 PM Report
Very beautiful, imaginative and superb poem!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 10, 2009 05:54:03 AM Report
Yeah, she has a way of bringing out our best. She hasn't done that for you yet, but you still have time to improve! LOL! Seriously, this is really good. Joe
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 4, 2009 11:23:48 PM Report
Wow, Henry! I'd say "did it right"! This is truly beautiful...exquisite!

I can imagine that anyone would be proud to be able to share these vows with the one that they love.

A great job, wonderfully expressing what's inside that big ole heart of yours :o)

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 4, 2009 08:56:51 PM Report
beautiful expression of devotion and promise.

hugs

cindy xo

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 4, 2009 08:47:45 PM Report
Oh, My she will love this with tears in her eyes....
 ~ ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAmy on July 4, 2009 04:17:27 PM Report
Sweet sentiments of love...very pretty Henry.

~Amy





 


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