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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 12 Comments
Date Added: June 14, 2009 11:06:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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With
With these eyes
Beuaty's witnessed in and out
You're one of a kind
Of this there is no doubt
 
With this mind
You're a precious treasure
One that can't be lived without
It's worth beyond measure
 
With this soul
A match made just for yours
Is it any great wonder
It's you this man adores
 
With this heart
You'll be loved forever
An unbreakable bond
That none on earth can sever
 
With this ring
A symbol of trust devine
Would you give your consent
So then in love's warm light we'll shine
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Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on April 7, 2010 09:16:46 AM Report
How beautifully we are able to love in words, in time, in tense.  This is just such a lovely expression of your love and care for the one who holds your heart.  A pleasure to read such joy today, and truly what the doctor ordered.  Thank you dear poet. ~Pamela
Comment By: FreeGlata on June 16, 2009 02:37:10 PM Report
I don't know what I can say that hasn't already been said, Henry...This is one of the most beautiful and tender expressions of love I have ever been privileged to read! With a declaration like this, no woman in her right mind would be able to say "no"!

 

With this heart

That love is returned

One hundred fold

You'll never be burned

 

With this soul

A connection is sincere

One is half of the other

Whether far or near

 

With this gold ring

"Forever" is assured

Heart in heart, soul to soul

Love is ever secured

 

Hugs...Oh, and this will be one of those poems that will bring readers back time after time to read...and to envy you and the one you love :o)

Glata

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 15, 2009 07:24:28 PM Report
There are some poems that just leave me breathless and in awe.

I swear I don't even know what to say ....except: Enchantingly romantic.

Awe that sounds so trite.......some things within the heart just cannot be expressed properly.

 

Sighs....hmmmmm

~Cindy xo

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 14, 2009 11:06:09 PM Report
What a very lucky lady ...who holds your loving heart....
 You write with great passion.....
 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 14, 2009 09:17:17 PM Report
With this poem
tonight you will get laid
We'll keep the lights off though
I don't want to be afraid!

With this comment
I hope to get a smile
It's hard to be sincere
it's just not my style

LOL! Joe

Comment By: FreeJulie on June 14, 2009 07:01:26 PM Report

You are lucky man to have found such love.  And we are all lucky to bask in the words you share born from such love. Beautiful write Henry.


Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on June 14, 2009 04:33:37 PM Report
Henry,
Beautiful write for your special one. Thank you for opening your heart and sharing your
adoring words with us. Lovely~lovely!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 14, 2009 03:16:03 PM Report
I just keep returning to read and reread this beautiful poem....

Makes me smile and sigh...:o)

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 14, 2009 01:13:59 PM Report
This poem held my heart in the palm of it's gentle, loving hand...and took my breath away...

Absolutely beautiful, Henry~

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeJennifer on June 14, 2009 01:13:08 PM Report
The first verse I was all "awwwwwwwwwww!" By the end of this poem I fell in love with my husband all over again! You know Henry your love is genuine> I love how you display all your love in your poetry!
Jen

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on June 14, 2009 12:38:35 PM Report
this is quite beautiful..."with" is a great title...as you go through life united as one...with this song...a verse likely to be added later...warm wishes filled with romance for you and your love, Linda
Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 14, 2009 11:47:45 AM Report
Henry. "I do". You write as your heart speaks to you. The best way. So nice.

                                                                John





 


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