| Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on April 7, 2010 09:16:46 AM
|How beautifully we are able to love in words, in time, in tense. This is just such a lovely expression of your love and care for the one who holds your heart. A pleasure to read such joy today, and truly what the doctor ordered. Thank you dear poet. ~Pamela|
| Comment By: Glata on June 16, 2009 02:37:10 PM
I don't know what I can say that hasn't already been said, Henry...This is one of the most beautiful and tender expressions of love I have ever been privileged to read! With a declaration like this, no woman in her right mind would be able to say "no"!
With this heart
That love is returned
One hundred fold
You'll never be burned
With this soul
A connection is sincere
One is half of the other
Whether far or near
With this gold ring
"Forever" is assured
Heart in heart, soul to soul
Love is ever secured
Hugs...Oh, and this will be one of those poems that will bring readers back time after time to read...and to envy you and the one you love :o)
| Comment By: Cindy Bendel on June 15, 2009 07:24:28 PM
There are some poems that just leave me breathless and in awe.
I swear I don't even know what to say ....except: Enchantingly romantic.
Awe that sounds so trite.......some things within the heart just cannot be expressed properly.
| Comment By: She Whispers on June 14, 2009 11:06:09 PM
|What a very lucky lady ...who holds your loving heart....|
You write with great passion.....
Always ~ She Whispers
| Comment By: Joe McNinney on June 14, 2009 09:17:17 PM
With this poem
tonight you will get laid
We'll keep the lights off though
I don't want to be afraid!
With this comment
I hope to get a smile
It's hard to be sincere
it's just not my style
| Comment By: Julie on June 14, 2009 07:01:26 PM
You are lucky man to have found such love. And we are all lucky to bask in the words you share born from such love. Beautiful write Henry.
| Comment By: Moon Fairy on June 14, 2009 04:33:37 PM
Beautiful write for your special one. Thank you for opening your heart and sharing your
adoring words with us. Lovely~lovely!
| Comment By: Wide Awake on June 14, 2009 03:16:03 PM
I just keep returning to read and reread this beautiful poem....
Makes me smile and sigh...:o)
| Comment By: Wide Awake on June 14, 2009 01:13:59 PM
This poem held my heart in the palm of it's gentle, loving hand...and took my breath away...
Absolutely beautiful, Henry~
| Comment By: Jennifer on June 14, 2009 01:13:08 PM
The first verse I was all "awwwwwwwwwww!" By the end of this poem I fell in love with my husband all over again! You know Henry your love is genuine> I love how you display all your love in your poetry!
| Comment By: Linda Jo on June 14, 2009 12:38:35 PM
|this is quite beautiful..."with" is a great title...as you go through life united as one...with this song...a verse likely to be added later...warm wishes filled with romance for you and your love, Linda|
| Comment By: john carter on June 14, 2009 11:47:45 AM
Henry. "I do". You write as your heart speaks to you. The best way. So nice.