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Author Name: Freela-la908 2 Comments
Date Added: June 14, 2009 04:06:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Heartbeat Voice
 
Speak to me but in visions
elaborate as they may be
or as true as a child's scribble
the crayon, your affection
 
Words can be spoken later,
I want to preserve you, that gaze,
we hold each other in
while slow dancing on outside the world
 
The dance floor so tempting,
a plateau of resting grass, where we lay,
you draw me calmness on the canvas sky
and love on my canvas heart
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeaspiring sage on June 14, 2009 05:50:13 PM Report
i like the ideas you express here..

i may have used more punctuation to make the message clearer,

thanks for posting your work!

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 14, 2009 04:52:50 AM Report
This almost has a coming of age feel about it, but whatever it is impressive and a pleasure to read~Graham.




 


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