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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: June 08, 2009 16:06:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Venus Fly Trap
Venus Fly Trap
 
You wait for me with open arms
On a silken bed of lies
To taste your sweetest poison
Would mean certain death for flies
But this crystal that you dangle
On a golden thread of bliss
Is more than i can handle
I am captured by your kiss
You play with my resistance
With your jewel of insistance
A single finger of doom
Bids me enter your heavenly room
I enter freely
To the world of the lost
Your legs wrap around me
Like a sudden Winter frost
Trapped in your deadly embrace
My life to be the cost
Surround me with your wings dark angel
Kiss my soul away
For i am just a foolish fly
Captured by the sweetest lie.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 18, 2009 04:32:57 PM Report
"Your legs wrap around me

 Like a sudden winter frost"...tantalizing...irrisistable but deadly just the same. I loved this moment of capture...felt the excitement of you knowingly surrendering to the ultimate sacrifice...so exquisite and delightfully bittersweet. It's a good death John. *smiles* The theme was executed in fine form...as was the foolish fly. =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeElla on June 9, 2009 06:23:49 AM Report
only the "flie" part of you that gets trapped...? :)

nice write here!

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 9, 2009 02:17:40 AM Report
And a very good one. The emotion and the intensity is still as evident as the first time.
Glad you re posted it again! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on June 8, 2009 07:40:15 PM Report
Oh wow, this was very good John.
I like the sensual yet mysterious feel to it.
~Tracie





 


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