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Author Name: Freemidnight 1 Comments
Date Added: June 05, 2009 07:06:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Broken Hearts Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
We part
our elegant flow slows
nearly stops
our heart beats never change
always intune
we part
but we fight our own ways
to not part
fight nearly to death
and yet it happens
then new hearts come
and we start dancing with the new hearts
but still want to get back with our old pair
then we give up
continue the elegant flow
still remembering the old
but now
the sway changes
the flow is differnt
the steps new
hearts merge
we continue our elegant flow

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Comment By: FreeDean on October 8, 2011 10:35:52 AM Report
Tiff, nicely written. I saw of 20 years of my life there, but the difference is: it is not possible to continue our elegant flow after doing it for many times during that 20 years.
Things change dramatically after so many years, and you can't scape but accepting the reality.

Really enjoyed it, you are very young, yet sound more mature for your age.





 


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