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Author Name: Freevictor69 10 Comments
Date Added: June 04, 2009 19:06:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Reason That I Breathe
 

Fingers moving slowly down your face

Heart jumps
Knees weak


Lips touch


A kiss


As light as a hummingbird
Drinking nectar from a flower


I savour your taste


Eyes closed
Breath held


Could this be real?
Can I be this lucky?


I open my eyes to see you looking back


The smile on your face
The flush on your cheeks
Answers my questions


I lean forward and whisper


My love
 
You are the reason that I breathe
Author's Notes:
Title inspired by a line in a Pussycat song...I know, that's quite sad! LOL!
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on June 25, 2013 06:48:35 PM Report

mmmmm so romantic....I love this write filled with joy, devotion, passion and most of all, love

Excellent write

 

MITZEE

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on August 14, 2009 04:41:41 PM Report
Not sad at all John, in fact quite romantic and very well written.  Henry
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on July 12, 2009 02:53:03 PM Report
Very romantic piece
 if only love could always feel this right

Well done
           Micky

Comment By: AdminRichardM on July 11, 2009 06:56:46 PM Report
Really soft, sensual, with love and care in every line. I like the way you weaved back and forth between the internal impulses and the action. It's a swell result!

Rich

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 16, 2009 07:51:25 PM Report
WOW John! This is romantic and tender, are you sure you wrote it? LOL! Seriously, this is terrific. Joe
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 7, 2009 06:33:21 PM Report
Don't dis my Pussycats, buddy...I think there's up there with the greats, like The Spice girls!!!...THis write proves what I've always said...All us writer-types are romantics at our cores...yer pal, len
Comment By: FreeAdri on June 5, 2009 11:34:23 AM Report
Wow, what a love poem. This is amazing. Sensual and romantic. Again, WOW
Adri x

Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on June 4, 2009 10:54:17 PM Report
Sensual and heated.  Truly a delight to enjoy. Loved this. ~Pamela 

Comment By: FreeAmy on June 4, 2009 09:54:04 PM Report
LOL @ the 'about'....sad? depends, are we talkin' the pussycat dolls or josie and the pussycats? (I know, pussycat doll's 'barely breathe')

Whatever your muse this came out rather nicely I think. It has a very warm intimate feeling to it.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 4, 2009 08:49:41 PM Report
You both are lucky to share such a sweet love.   Very beautiful write.

 

Lady D





 


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