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Comment By:  leahlopez on June 25, 2013 06:48:35 PM |
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mmmmm so romantic....I love this write filled with joy, devotion, passion and most of all, love
Excellent write
MITZEE
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| Comment By: Henry M. on August 14, 2009 04:41:41 PM |
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Not sad at all John, in fact quite romantic and very well written. Henry
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| Comment By: Micky McMaster on July 12, 2009 02:53:03 PM |
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Very romantic piece
if only love could always feel this right
Well done
Micky
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Comment By:  RichardM on July 11, 2009 06:56:46 PM |
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Really soft, sensual, with love and care in every line. I like the way you weaved back and forth between the internal impulses and the action. It's a swell result!
Rich
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Comment By:  Joe McNinney on June 16, 2009 07:51:25 PM |
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WOW John! This is romantic and tender, are you sure you wrote it? LOL! Seriously, this is terrific. Joe
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on June 7, 2009 06:33:21 PM |
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Don't dis my Pussycats, buddy...I think there's up there with the greats, like The Spice girls!!!...THis write proves what I've always said...All us writer-types are romantics at our cores...yer pal, len
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| Comment By: Adri on June 5, 2009 11:34:23 AM |
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Wow, what a love poem. This is amazing. Sensual and romantic. Again, WOW
Adri x
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| Comment By: Pamela A. Lamppa on June 4, 2009 10:54:17 PM |
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Sensual and heated. Truly a delight to enjoy. Loved this. ~Pamela
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| Comment By: Amy on June 4, 2009 09:54:04 PM |
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LOL @ the 'about'....sad? depends, are we talkin' the pussycat dolls or josie and the pussycats? (I know, pussycat doll's 'barely breathe')
Whatever your muse this came out rather nicely I think. It has a very warm intimate feeling to it.
~Amy
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| Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on June 4, 2009 08:49:41 PM |
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You both are lucky to share such a sweet love. Very beautiful write.
Lady D
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