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Author Name: Freela-la908 1 Comments
Date Added: June 01, 2009 03:06:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Shivering
This is no mere feeling,
It's violent convulsing brain damage.
Hatred eroding away the controlled movements
Stretching and scaring my precious skin
 
This is more than a tell-all glance
That you steal from me, I am unwilling
Yet you lead me away all the same
And begin to ruin me
 
STOP!
I say, but will you ever?,
Our connection is no mere relationship
Nothing less than a storm to shatter my whole world
And all its frozen oceans
 
This is no mere feeling
You are a fascinated stranger, obsessed,
You will inflict and be my finale
You will never just pass me by
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Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on September 16, 2009 04:34:52 PM Report
Very effectual piece here.I was emotionally moved by it.




 


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