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Author Name: Freejohncarter 11 Comments
Date Added: May 31, 2009 17:05:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Len x
Len x
 
The magic of a lesser man
Could never perform his wisdom
without a safety plan.
He shoots from the hip
and fires with the tip
of his quill he holds in his hand subtle soft and funny. He could be my perfect honey. If i'm coming on too strong. Do you think my last line is too long?
Author's Notes:
Len is one of the nicest men i know. I hope he takes this in the love and humour it was writen.
                                                            Your friend John
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Comment By: FreeAngel on June 25, 2009 03:21:24 PM Report
Ha ha nice one John for Len

 

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 1, 2009 04:40:57 PM Report
Kiss me, you fool!! :o)...Thanks so much for the kind words, John...No...I think that last line is just PERFECT!!!......len
Comment By: FreeFilthy on June 1, 2009 04:26:17 PM Report

Great little ditty here for a great fella. Nice one John.


Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on June 1, 2009 04:59:30 AM Report
so true
Comment By: FreeAdri on June 1, 2009 03:32:08 AM Report
Oh, Mr. Cool will love this!  This is so cute and witty. 

Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 31, 2009 11:36:50 PM Report
John,
 I love this guys wit and charm...
 We have been friends for years

 You know he will come back with a poem....
 Cute poem... Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 31, 2009 11:12:57 PM Report
Oh, mi gosh. He'll love it. I don't think it gets too strong for len. ML
Comment By: FreeAmy on May 31, 2009 08:07:59 PM Report
ooo I love the goofball humor in this and I'm bettin' he will too. That long line and its weird break was honestly, getting on my nerves when all the sudden you're punchline explained it....very clever. Too cute!

~Amy

Comment By: FreeSteve on May 31, 2009 06:11:18 PM Report

Here, Here !  Well said my friend


Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on May 31, 2009 06:06:20 PM Report
hey, you made me laugh!  "do you think my last line is too long?" this is funny...so i know Len, who is the funny one of all funny will love it.  shee
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 31, 2009 05:42:07 PM Report
John:   this is really cute.  

 

 

LadyD





 


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