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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 11 Comments
Date Added: May 07, 2009 18:05:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Within A Moment



We alone held the full moon captive
Determined by our force of will
An unquenchable primal desire  
These two were welded together
By a flame deep within the soul
Our molten love soon galvanized
Fused into an essence of white hot heat  

And we lived our life in a moment of lust


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Comment By: FreeMary on October 22, 2010 04:50:05 PM Report
we alone had the full moon captive
Comment By: FreeAngel on May 13, 2009 03:25:22 PM Report
Red hot Steve. Wonderful enjoyed


Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAdri on May 13, 2009 07:55:42 AM Report
The first line sets the mood for the poem. 
Very beautiful piece. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on May 9, 2009 07:04:36 PM Report
I love the images you use: light, heat, all these images of smithing, crafting something beautiful. Well written,



Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 9, 2009 05:38:40 PM Report
I have never read so much said in so few words, buddy...This is both scorch AND torch, Shady...Great stuff!!!...len
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on May 8, 2009 06:17:10 PM Report
Steve this was sizzling!! Loved it my friend.. My favs this shall go..


Hugs to ya!


Comment By: FreeAmy on May 8, 2009 04:30:12 PM Report
The last line of this is a wonderful thought. It would be great if we could keep the same intensity throughout the entire relationship as what we have in the beginning....a lifeful of lusty moments.



Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 8, 2009 02:31:47 AM Report a loss for words...enjoy this rare moment


Some like it hot!



Comment By: Freejohn carter on May 7, 2009 08:06:25 PM Report
Versuvious!!! I like.


Comment By: FreeAngelface on May 7, 2009 07:26:51 PM Report
Oh my, Steve!!!! This was such an interresting write! Keep up the wonderful work!



Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on May 7, 2009 06:49:16 PM Report
Moving write, always enjoy your posts.


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